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Thursday, May 13, 2010

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Tumse hi khayal-e-vasl hai... Tumse hi meri justju...
"Niraj" tumhare ishq mein... Yun qurbaan milega...

Har sheh zindagi ki... Main shauk se guzar gaya...
ho gaur har ek saans par... Ek shokh bayaan milega..

Kuchle hai phool kitne... Mere ishq ki rehguzar mein....
Mere rang-e-rooh-o-lafz mein.. Ek gulsitaan milega...

Itna to Hai yakeen... Mere ishq ko ae jaana....
Mazaar par meri... Har pal ek kaarwaan milega....

Ek humzubaan ki khaakh mein...pursukoon hai zindagi...
Mujhe khured ke dekh lo... Ek jaan- fishaan milega...

Is zist mein yeh sochkar... Har raat yun guzaar di...
Shab-e-chiraag lekar... Ek meharbaan milega...

Yeh Do pal ki aashiqui... Do pal ki aarzoo...
Kahin bebasi milegi... Kahin kehkashaan Milega....

7 comments:

  1. Geeta: This is almost in contrast to the class of your previous "Searching for it". Dastaan (2nd couplet) is feminine and so doesnt go with milega. And what is ishq-o-rehguzar?
    But i like the Ghalibian "Itna to hai yakeen mere ishq ko ae jaana, Mazaar par meri har pal ek karwaan milega"

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  2. i have switched to AIRTEL
    my AIRTEL number is 9975096020

    pichhla number delete nahi karna
    woh kuchh din baad phir chalu hoga

    mitra sir

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  3. ishq-o-rehguzar ya ishq-e-rehguzar?

    mitra sir

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  4. 1) itna to hai....... mere ishq ko ae jaana ---

    'ko' thoda ambiguous sunaayee de raha hai mujhe

    aisa hai to ---

    itna hai yakeen mujhe ... mere ishq pe aye jaana
    mazaar par meri ... har pal ek kaarwaan milega

    2) khuredna ya kuredna - which one is right?

    3) what about ---

    Sochkar is zist mein... har raat guzaar di
    shab-e-chiraag le kar... koi meharbaan milega


    mitra sir

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  5. what about

    sochkar, is zist mein... har raat yun guzaar di
    shab-e-chiraag le kar... koi ek meharbaan milega

    mitra sir

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  6. @ Geeta : Point Taken...Have Changed it (Considering the flow).

    Thanks for the Suggestion.


    @ Mitra Sir : Ishq-O-Reguzar is wrong. Have Corrected it.

    Khuredna is correct.

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  7. @ Geeta and Sir :

    Actually ..."Searching for it" was meant to be my statement rather than a Topic.

    Also, "???" is me asking for the Topic here too.

    Ironically... Both words have come closer to be the topic themselves.
    Suggest me a better one if you can.

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