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Friday, December 18, 2009

Karz...

Roz Sawera Hote hi...
Ek Noor Chamakne Lagta hai...
Rozgaar ki Rehguzar mein...
Zehan bhatakne lagta hai...
Aarzu.on ki Dopahar tak...
Pasina Tapakne lagta hai...
Pareshaniyon ki shaam ho..
To badan dehakne lagta hai..
Teri Yaadon ki raat mein...
Zameen behakne lagti hai...
Ek nashile Kagaz par..
Mera Lafz chahekne lagta hai..

Yun Guzarte hain..mere din..
Mere Maah...Mere Saal..
Roz Ek Karz Ka Tamaasha..
Roz Ek Sood ka Bawaal...

Jaise Doobe hain..mere ashq..mere nabz...
mere Jism-o-rooh...mere ranj-o-sawaal...
Jaise rakkhe ho.n Girwi...kadamon mein tere...
Mere shaam-o-Saher...Mere khwab-o-khayal...

2 comments:

  1. Geeta: For the last 4 lines of the first stanza, may I suggest:

    Teri yaadon ki raat mein
    Chaand bhi ghatne lagta hai
    Ek nashile kagaz par
    Mera kalam behakne lagta hai

    I know it is probably audacious of me to suggest an improvement; feel free to say exactly what you think of this; i won't mind :)

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  2. Nice Thought...Keeps the Continuity going....

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