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Monday, April 6, 2009

Ghar (An Attempt)

Dagmagaate Hue Kadam Jo badhe..
Mere Aashiyaane.. Ki Ore..
Darwaza.. Hansa..Betahaash..
Andar.. Kahkahon ka Shor..

Deewarein Thahake.. Lagati..
Hain Khidkiyaan Kamzor..
Farsh.. Ugalta.. angaar..
Tammanaon Ka Munh Chor..

Dabhochti Tanhaiyaan...
Cheenkhti Khamoshiyaan,..
Kabhi...Teergi.. hain chaadarein..
Kabhi Sannatta Ghanghor..

Nukile Kone hain..jaise bane..
Shikast-e-Umeed.. ka sabab..
Hun Kasmasata..bebas..khali..
Kaho.. Jaoon Kis Ore..

Maza hai tab aata..mujhe...jab..
lage keemat.. sulagte..is bhanvar ki..
3500 Rs... Per Square Feet..
Aur 20 Rs.. per Floor..

2 comments:

  1. Wow! great buildup and excellent ending! (do i see a slight P. Mishra influence or is it my imagination? jo bhi hai achha hai, i dont mean this negatively)

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  2. excellent attempt bandya...loved it!

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