Bahut hi Laparwaah rahe...."Niraj" apni mohabbat mein...
"Chabhi-waale" ki tarah..nikal jaate the..apni dukaan chhod kar..
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Welcome to Niraj's World. This is an attempt to channelise my very soft hobby of writing Hindi/Urdu Poems. I might be a bit amateur in literary terms.. Suggestions are welcome though.. Possibly.. a blog was right because.. I tend to lose papers..Thanks for visiting and hope to see you soon.
Geeta: v good start. i hope there's more.
ReplyDeleteGeeta: have u heard the song 'ha rehem mehfooz' from the movie Aamir? if not, pls do. and i hope it inspires u to write somthing in that genre (smthg diff frm the nakamiyab mohabbat genre. not that its bad, but i want to see how u will do in that arena.)
ReplyDeleteYes.. I have heard of the song.. the composition to be specific is by Amit Trivedi.. who did a "DEV D" later and "IKTARA" for Wake Up Sid.. Too good...I actually try and put in Crude Realities and have a sarcastic perspective to it in my poetries. I will definitely try and see if I am able to write this way...
ReplyDelete@Geeta : Suggest that you read "Taaqat" which I wrote on 26/11 and let me know your feedback...Its somewhere in March/April
ReplyDeleteI didnt know 'iktara' was Amit Trivedi's. Rather disappointing actually, maine ek-do baar radio pe suna hai but it's far below his 'ha reham' and devD-wale high standards. But he n his lyricist Amitabh are a deadly combination. DevD ke lyrics kya original hain! Aur maine "Taaqat" dubara padhi, to remind myself. It is really good. I didnt mean to criticize you or to say that you're stuck in one genre, mujhe aise hi voh gaana yaad aya so shared those thoughts with you, because maine socha shayad isi khayal se kuch inspiration aa jaye..
ReplyDelete@ Geeta : Thanks for all the inputs rendered by you. You know that i choose only selects to share my poetries right from our college days. I rather like the interest and honest inputs provided by you, Mitra Sir and other friends of my on the blog. It helps me improve,find my mistakes and hopefully avoid next time. Please keep "NIT-PICKING" and to sum it up.."I LIKE THEM"...Thanks a lot once again.
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